Just the darkness comes
You will never live for me, though I would die For just a smile You will never breathe a heartfelt breath Upon my breathing, Nor feel the point Ive made. No smile will wash my face of sin No look...
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Roger, The first 2 lines just slay me. Quote: You will never live for me, though I would die For just a smile The anger in this piece is so evident! w"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the...
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Quote:Nor feel the point Ive made. No smile will wash my face of sin No look will remind of who I am. To me the power of this shines best right there. Well done, Louis. OM ~*~*~Eastern Wings at...
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there is power all through this piece, insight and emotion play out through your words marvelously."I am lost within my own mind." Matrim Cauthon "Smile, the CIA is watching"
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oh Mia Karm! My heart pains here. I am still swallowing tears.
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i have to answer you first dee darlin...my leeedle feeesh... you honour me my sweet friend....loves you darlin louis
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"There will be no more touch of skin Upon my bearing, hoping for some future days. No easy shared moment, that comes with joining No right to be the one because its so." Sounds like the painful,...
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Closure is indeed what you need, I know you feel that as well. You've been haunted by memories for far too long. This poem is so painful, yet courageous and soul baring at a basic level. Not many...
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thanks willow...ah loves your work honey bunch... not anger tho...hopelessness perhaps...connections are an ephemeral thing... once made they are not easily broken...or lost louis and the saying is...
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you see yourself in face of those that are important to you otter...this is absolutely true louis thanks
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I have missed you Mia Karm.... im me... I will get the message if I am not there right away.
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if anyone has ever shared they know this is what its like... if you havent, seek it...its all of what we do louis
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i totally get what your saying i really enjoyed this and cant wait to read more of your work
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this, might have been said before? buuut im gonna say it again anyways. "You will never live for me, though I would die For just a smile" beautiful lines, I do believe this is my fav. of yours....it's...
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ill have to be more simple for you bubblitious thanks louis
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Sniffle, what a very painful piece to read for any who have suffered in love. Full of emotion, very expressive. Well done. ~ SiobhanWhen you can see no light in the darkness, it's merely hidden by the...
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